process of my narrative

I began by picking my topic which was realtively easy.  I knew that I was going to write about how swimming has influenced my life as a whole, and made me the person I am today.  Once I got my topic approved I had plan out what I was going to write about.  I decided to write about how swimming came into my life and how that has changed me into the person I am today through the background of my swimming career.
After I got my first draft done I had to work on revising it. I was not sure what I could do to improve my paper after the first draft.  then we had a peer review day and I got some ideas from my fellow peers.  After I had their advice I rewrote my paper and added some more information and took out some that was not needed.  The next step that I had to go through was the meeting with Ryan.  He told me that I need to fix some grammar errors and make the story a little more personal.  I am still in the process of makeing the final draft and having all my paper just the wy that I want it to be.